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The wild adventure of Aki and Toshi,

The lock-down had ended and all the people in Aki and Toshi's bubble had returned to their schools and workplaces, leaving them feeling lost and alone! Toshi wandered in to the lounge to see Aki looking sad now that the house was quiet. So Toshi suggested that they went on an adventure of their own to find the magical unicorns. Aki thought about this for a moment and let out a bark of enjoyment!
With that they set off and walked to the magical forest at the end of their street, it took them a long time to get deep into the forest but once they were deep inside Aki was scared he realised that they were lost and they didn’t have their humans to help them get home, they walked deeper and deeper inside, it was dark and there were strange sounds it was getting even scarier so Toshi found a tree that had fallen over and made a bed for them from the pine needles so they could shelter from the night. As they settled in for the long dark night Toshi thought to himself how silly going on an adventure without his people was, how hungry he was, and how he would love to be snuggled at the feet of his dad instead of in the dark with the scary sounds!

Aki woke with a feeling he was being watched, when he opened his eyes he saw eyes starring back at him so he let out a loud bark, and whatever it was turned and ran away – with that he chased it running faster and faster but he couldn’t catch it! Up the tree, it ran leaving him to bark at the base of the giant tree. Toshi followed the barks to find Aki once they were reunited Toshi suggested they left the dark forest and left exploring and hunting for the unicorns to the humans so they wouldn’t be so scared. So as the sun started to shine through the trees the boys began the long walk home.
As they came to the edge of the forest they could hear familiar sounds, they paused for a moment and listened to be sure, and sure enough the sounds where their humans yelling out their names with a hint of panic with each howl. Toshi looked to Aki barked and began to run, they ran as fast as their wee legs could carry them.. as they came to the over the final hill both boys barked delighted at the sight of their humans, with one big leap they were back in the arms of the humans that loved them.
Their humans carried the very tired exhausted boys home where the belonged, lay them by the fire with a bowl of warm milk, and there Aki and Toshi fell fast asleep dreaming of the next adventure, but next time they wouldn’t go alone.

I fixed it from Mrs Allan-Fleatcher commenting what I mucked up but I'm thank full of course so thanks alot Mrs Allan-Fleatcher For telling me 😌