Try starting the sentence with the 'ed' form of the verb. It makes for a punchy start to the sentence.
Remember the rule- When you have finished your -ed phrase, place a comma, then write the rest of your sentence.
You can use some 'ed' words- Suprised, excited, committed., undaunted, determined, overpowered, concerned, cornered, delighted, enthralled.
Examples:
Detained to win, Tony pushed himself harder in the last meters of sprint.
Concerned for the well-being of others, the Prime Minister passed new laws.
Bored in this class, I wrote nothing.
Shocked hearing my brother played roblox, turns out he played ark
No comments:
Post a Comment
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.